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Notos 19th May 2013, 4:34 AM edit delete
Notos
Enter Galena! This is the first page with a more sizable amount of dialogue, and also an example of how I'll be doing dialogue heavy scenes.
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Kay 19th May 2013, 6:08 AM edit delete reply
Kay
This is amazing O_O
dougwarner59 19th May 2013, 6:36 AM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
Another great page! I usually don't like long dialogs like that but you made it very intertaining. keep it coming.
Notos 19th May 2013, 2:31 PM edit delete reply
Notos
Thanks Doug, glad you think so because I tend to agree on not usually liking long dialogue, I was hoping to find a way to make it work, since there will be alot as the story picks up.
Ender 19th May 2013, 6:55 AM edit delete reply
Nicely done!
Gangerworld 19th May 2013, 7:48 AM edit delete reply
Gangerworld
Totally enraptured by this page. Seriously, if I could rate it an 11 (if I could rate, lol), I would. Just a super engrossing way of telling a story right here.
Notos 19th May 2013, 2:32 PM edit delete reply
Notos
Thanks alot Ganger, thats nice of you:) I took out ratings only because it takes up extra space on the pace and people seem to have trouble fitting the comic as it is, haha, but I appreciate that
Daftjustice 20th May 2013, 3:39 AM edit delete reply
Such a cool idea haven't seen something like this before.
Draginbeard 20th May 2013, 7:16 AM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
wow, that was a really good scene! Would have taken me about 10 pages to pull off... yikes!
Notos 20th May 2013, 1:49 PM edit delete reply
Notos
Thanks Dragin, it's handy to be able to fit alot of content into one 'page' but at the same time it makes the overall 'pagecount' seem less
TheSmilingPsycho 20th May 2013, 1:35 PM edit delete reply
TheSmilingPsycho
Such a quality comic.
Guest 20th May 2013, 4:28 PM edit delete reply
It felt really weird to hear him say the text out loud. I think a cutaway to the phone's screen would have felt more natural.
josbell975 23rd May 2013, 10:45 PM edit delete reply
josbell975
I loved it from the start! And it just keeps getting better!
josbell975 4th Dec 2013, 11:42 PM edit delete reply
josbell975
My first post! I created my comic furry acct just to comment here since you were worth praising for doing such an awsome story!

And I can see it now, Galvin squints and so does his synth eye...he does look like a goon, lol!
ashrium 25th May 2013, 5:52 AM edit delete reply
your way of exposing dialogue with this format is very interesting definitely i will keep an eye on this comic and Vinnie is cute :3.
Notos 25th May 2013, 2:36 PM edit delete reply
Notos
thanks ash, and glad you like Vinnie!
LooeyQ 29th May 2013, 2:32 PM edit delete reply
LooeyQ
What a great page!!! This needs to be made into an animated feature one day!!!
Marlee-The-Creator 9th Jun 2013, 5:04 AM edit delete reply
Marlee-The-Creator
I'm not usually up to huge walls of text on one page but you broke it up enough for it to not be painful. This is great! Very original, modern and professional looking. Also a very interesting grasp on what the future would be like. The idea of leisure credits seems almost annoying, but interesting. I don't think I ever would've thought of something like that and I write a lot of scifi futuristic stories. Gonna read on now...
Doomy 30th Jun 2013, 6:11 AM edit delete reply
Doomy
Waaaah been reading this comic and omg it looks amazing!

Story is cute too. I love the nickname Vin-Vin as well. <3
robroy5044 11th May 2014, 1:36 AM edit delete reply
Alex from Young Protectors sent me over. Great animation and layout. Like the main character already. I'll be back.
JadeDragon 18th May 2014, 5:03 AM edit delete reply
Um... shouldn't that be "he's way out of my league?" Though shy Vinnie saying it the other way around is pretty darn cute.
Cosima Fayte 25th May 2014, 10:37 PM edit delete reply
I honestly wish this had sound.
im only on page 6 of chapter 1
ArtistXXY 24th May 2015, 2:01 PM edit delete reply
ArtistXXY
I'm intrigued by the idea of Leisure Credits.
Vinnie and Gelena are wonderful characters. I especially like Galena already. :D
dzcomics 24th Aug 2016, 9:44 PM edit delete reply
dzcomics
This is a really amazing way to do a comic. I've never seen anything quite like it. I also adore the artstyle/setting.
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